How To Write a Successful Paragraph

  Belive me writing a successfull paragraf is not hard as you think it is.First thing you need to do is making a brainstorm about what you going to write about.You should think your main sentence and your supportive sentences.Because you cant get out of your main and supportive sentences.Your paragraph must be a whole, but be carefull about your main sentence.If it is too general it wont be a paragraph it will be an assay.Next, you should write your paragraph to a worksheet.When doing it dont care about grammer, spelling, or punctuation.Just write it whatever comes to your mind.Then you will edit your writing.You will fix your mistakes when you writing it.Don't forget to finish your paragraph with concluding sentence.Congragulations! You have written a successfull paragraph.

The "Weaker" Sex

It is often said that women are the weaker sex, but women are actually superior to men in several ways.Women live longer than men and healtier than men in all countries of the world.This difference starts at birth and countries until old age.On the average women live seven years longer than men in the USA according to a research.There are 105 boys to every 100 girls at birth but there are twice as many women as men at age 80.Women are better than  men things that involves five senses.Women have sharper sense of smell and taste.Men are physcially storenger than women but women are mentally stronger.For example, in Wolrd War II during the bomb attacks on London, more men than women had emotional problems.Do you still belive that women are "the weaker sex"

Women Rights

  In the history of wolrd women rights has always been disregarded.Hundreds of yeras ago people used to bury their daughters alive.People were using women as a material, a tool.As the time goes on women started to become a more valuable.Evenmore than men.At this time in the world in many countries women can vote and can be president.But not in all countries.And there are still couple of countries in the world that uses women as property.Women can't even dress as they pleases.It's painfull to see this countries are muslim countries.Women are very precious in Islam.It is just wrong.We are a muslim country aswell.But women has more rights than men.More advantages than man.And I don't think its fair.

My Classmate

  My classmate is a hardworking student.His name is Mazlum.He comes from Gaziantep.He is from Şanlıurfa.Urfa is a city famous with its food.He lived 4 years in Cyprus.He likes learning new languages.He knows 4 different languages.Greek,Turkish,English and Kurdish.He is quiete good at English.Eventhough he studies it for like 5-6 months.He is studying English Language and Literature at Bingöl University.In Bingöl there is not many things to do.So he doesn't have many hobbies.He likes playing football and watching survivor.He wants to get rid off Bingöl as soon as possible.After the University he wants to be an English teacher.Mazlum works hard to reach his goals.I think he will become a very good teacher.