How To Write a Successful Paragraph

  Belive me writing a successfull paragraf is not hard as you think it is.First thing you need to do is making a brainstorm about what you going to write about.You should think your main sentence and your supportive sentences.Because you cant get out of your main and supportive sentences.Your paragraph must be a whole, but be carefull about your main sentence.If it is too general it wont be a paragraph it will be an assay.Next, you should write your paragraph to a worksheet.When doing it dont care about grammer, spelling, or punctuation.Just write it whatever comes to your mind.Then you will edit your writing.You will fix your mistakes when you writing it.Don't forget to finish your paragraph with concluding sentence.Congragulations! You have written a successfull paragraph.

The "Weaker" Sex

It is often said that women are the weaker sex, but women are actually superior to men in several ways.Women live longer than men and healtier than men in all countries of the world.This difference starts at birth and countries until old age.On the average women live seven years longer than men in the USA according to a research.There are 105 boys to every 100 girls at birth but there are twice as many women as men at age 80.Women are better than  men things that involves five senses.Women have sharper sense of smell and taste.Men are physcially storenger than women but women are mentally stronger.For example, in Wolrd War II during the bomb attacks on London, more men than women had emotional problems.Do you still belive that women are "the weaker sex"